Lesson 2-1

Step 1: Interpret the Customer's Message

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Step 1: Let the customer's words guide you.

Guidelines

  1. Locate the key words within the subject line and text.
  2. Look for emotion key words.
  3. Look for priority and severity key words.
  4. Look for problem key words.
  5. Look for solution or expectation key words.
  6. Identify the customer's knowledge and experience.
  7. Identify the customer's willingness to cooperate.

 

Locate the key words in
the subject line and text

Key words stand for concepts. You must use the same key words throughout your message, regardless of how many times you use them. If you change them, the reader wonders whether the concept has changed.

Use the key words to guide your responses.

  1. Make sure the customer understands the concepts behind the key words.
  2. Respond to the customer's key words to ensure that you are fulfilling the customer's expectations and the customer understands.
  3. Use the customer's key words in your responses to ensure that the customer knows you are responding to his or her request.

The key words described in this lesson are the words the customer uses in his or her e-mail to you. Note these key words and use them throughout your response. This ensures that the customer feels you understand him or her, and that the customer understands what you are saying when you respond.

Look for key words in the subject line as well as the text.

However, change key words that are inflammatory or very negative. Soften them.

Example:

      In this e-mail, the customer's key words are bolded:

 

Subject: Unfair Policy

Dear Tech Systems Now:

This doesn't seem fair. How come I must pay for software upgrades? I returned everything you asked for. I'm losing faith in your exchange policy! Am I obligated to pay for shipping too?

                                          Joe Customer

 

 

Response:

 

 

Dear Joe,

I'm sorry that it doesn't seem fair to you that you must pay for shipping of software upgrades. I looked up your records and found that you did return everything we asked for. Thank you. You are asking about our letter to you explaining that the check for $54.30 we enclosed was for the parts you returned minus the shipping costs.

I hope we can restore your faith in making exchanges with us. Let me explain why the exchange policy requires you to pay the shipping costs.

[response continues here]

 

Exercise:

In the following e-mail, determine which words are key words. Write them in the box beneath the message:

 

 

Dear Tech Systems Now:

I'm new to computers and need some immediate help. My system has locked up and my keyboard won't work. I've run the tests in the troubleshooting manual, and still nothing! I'm getting apprehensive that maybe I'm too old to learn new tricks.

                                          Daisy May

 

Type the key words in this box:


You don't know what the customer is really feeling, what the customer really saw or did, or what the customer knows. You only have these words to guide you.

If you respond to the customer based on your viewpoint rather than the customer's words, you may take the customer in directions that will create frustration and not accomplish your goals: solving the problem, creating a satisfied customer, and helping the customer learn how to solve problems.

Examples:

Wrong

"I understand how you could be getting frantic over the problem."

The customer didn't say she was "frantic." She used the word "apprehensive." Assigning more emotion than she is feeling can put her off or give her the feeling she should be frantic.

"It is good that you ran the keyboard tests. Let's look for some other problem."

The customer said she "ran the tests in the troubleshooting manual," not that she ran the "keyboard tests." That may take you past where the customer really is. She may have run every test but the keyboard tests.

This lesson will help you identify these words and learn to respond to the customer in ways that don't go beyond what the customer really meant.

 

Locate the emotion key words
in the subject line and text

The first set of words you will look for is emotion words. They describe the customer's present state.

Examples:

tired of, need, frustrated, afraid, love, hate, pleased, displeased, ecstatic, enjoying, happy

These are not emotion words:

"Can't you get it right!" "There's never anyone around." "It works!!!" "I've never had such good response. Thanks."

When the customer writes statements like these, you only know that the direction of any emotions will be positive or negative. However, you don't know what they are or how strong they are. If you decide how the customer feels based on them, you will be assigning emotions based on what you would be feeling if you said the words, not what the customer is feeling.

Analyze the customer's present status by locating these emotion words or positive/negative phrases, but don't assign emotions to them. For one thing, you'll tend to take negative emotions personally, but for another, these words mean quite different things for different people.

For George, saying "I am so frustrated I could explode" may be his way of starting the conversation to gain sympathy before being very calm and cooperative; for Mary, it may be her way of being cute or funny; and for Oscar, it may be his way of really expressing an "end of my rope" frustration.

For now, just locate these words for use later. These words will become emotion key words that you'll use later in your response.

In the following e-mail, determine which words are emotion key words. Write them in the box beneath the message.

 

 

Dear Software Associates:

I love my new catalog of software products! I've been anticipating its arrival in my mail for weeks. However, I'm very disappointed that you don't offer any tax software. I'm going to start on my taxes next week and my data is already in your Financial Advisor package. I'm desperate to use the data I already have for my taxes. Any suggestions?   

                                        Susan Rider

 

Type the emotion key words in this box:


Notes:

Stay with the words. Avoid trying to interpret the customer's key words. We all have enough trouble understanding the feelings of people who live with us, let alone a stranger who sends a single e-mail with three or four words to describe his or her emotions.

In this e-mail, you know the customer was looking forward to receiving the catalog and is very pleased with it: "I love my new catalog . . . anticipating its arrival for weeks." However, you know that she is less than pleased with the fact that it doesn't have the tax functions: "disappointed . . . desperate to use the data I already have for my taxes."

You would not want to assume "disappointed" for her meant very unhappy or displeased. It may only mean "it would have been nice to have had it." Don't write "I understand your anger at not having the tax functions . . ." or "You have every right to be frustrated that the software doesn't include those functions . . ." You don't know what the customer meant by "disappointed." However, do respond to the feeling: "I understand that you are disappointed . . ." or "I can see why you are disappointed . . ."


Locate the priority and severity key
words in the subject line and text.

Locate the words the customer uses to describe the priority or severity of the problem or the expectations for action. They will help you decide how anxious the customer is for a solution, and also allow you to decide whether to escalate the problem.

Example of priority or severity key words

very important, critical, don't hurry, right now, as soon as you can, will create problems, need it yesterday, stopped without it

In the following e-mail, determine which words are priority or severity key words. Write them in the box beneath the message.

 

Suitable Instrument Systems:

I was supposed to receive the cables and connectors so I could finish installing my system. That was two weeks ago and I'm still waiting. I need them right now so I can get my system into operation. This is becoming more than a nuisance.

       Brad Pitstop

 

 

Type the priority or severity key words in this box:

 


 

Locate the problem key words
in the subject line and text.

The next set of key words to locate is problem key words. They help to identify the problem the customer is having. Separate them into generalized words and sense words.

Generalized words

Generalized words indicate the general area where the customer had a problem but do not clearly specify the problem. They are traps for customer service representatives because they can lead into blind alleys and are open to misinterpretation. The customer may write, "I can't start the program" when the problem he or she really had was installing it or starting one of the functions in the program.

Don't assume that the customer's generalized words are accurate descriptions of the problem. The customer may write, "Why are there always delays in receiving my data tapes?" when the data tapes are shipped and arrive within a week, a very reasonable time. The customer may view three days as a "reasonable time."

Sense words

Sense words describe things the customer saw, heard, felt, tasted, or touched. They are more reliable indications of the problem. Most customers don't communicate in sense words. You may have to gather more information to be sure that you know what the customer has actually experienced.

Separate the generalized words from sense key words so you know how to respond later.

In the following e-mail, determine which words are problem key words. Separate them into generalized and sense key words. Write them in the box beneath the message.

 

 

Dear Traynor Software Services,

I was on the house description screen putting in the information for my house and it asked for number of baths and it didn't work. Your program wouldn't save it. I put in 2.5 baths and it kept changing it to 3 baths.

Harold Homeowner

 

Type the problem key words in this box. Put "Generalized" before the generalized problem key words and "Sensed" before the sensed problem key words:


 

Locate the solution or expectation
key words in the subject line and text.

Customers often believe they have a solution or have expectations for your solution. You may not use their suggestions, but you do need to acknowledge them and fulfill their expectations. In your initial analysis of the customer's e-mail, locate the solution or expectation key words. Later, you will make sure you have acknowledged and fulfilled them in your response.

For most e-mails, the customer will have no solution or expectation words. The customer may simply want you to provide a solution, or may want to simply vent frustration. You will respond, but you don't need to focus on specific solutions or expectations for the customer.

Examples:

The solution or expectation key words are bolded:

  1. "I'll never understand why it takes so long to get through to technical support on the phone." (No solution or expectation key words. The customer is venting or complaining. The generalized words "takes so long" may not be accurate. Respond to the customer, but don't apologize for it taking so long. You can respond, "I'm sorry you aren't getting through to technical support as quickly as you would like. How can I help you?," but not "I'm sorry it takes so long to get through to technical support on the phone.")
  2. I've tried everything and can't seem to test my diskette drives correctly. Help. " (Customer needs the procedure to solve the problem.)
  3. "The CD Writer I bought from you won't close when I insert a CD, so I'm sending it back. Send another. " (Customer wants a replacement.)
  4. "Do I understand this offer correctly? To install the software, I need to install another operating system first?" (Customer wants an answer.)
  5. "The serial/infrared ports test group subtests failed because of your dysfunctional modem. From now on, I'm running the diagnostics my way." (Customer is not requesting a solution and has no expectations. She is venting and showing her expertise.)

In the following e-mail, determine which words are solution or expectation key words.

 

 

Pragmatests,

I've installed your testing software and uninstalled it and installed it and I'm getting pretty tired of not having it work. It keeps telling me that it can't find a file. All I want is another CD that has all the files so I can get this thing going. E-mail me letting me know when you can send one.

Gerald Spencer

 

Type the solution or expectation key words in this box.


 

Identify the customer's knowledge
and experience level from the words.

The next characteristics of the customer you will identify do not require that you use the key words in your responses. However, the words will still identify the customer's characteristics for you. Use them in your analysis.

First, consider the customer's knowledge and experience levels. Look for words that tell you how much the customer knows about the problem, product, or service, and how much experience the customer has had with the product or service.

Examples:

Little knowledge or experience. The customer doesn't use the correct terminology and refers to the product using naive descriptions.

I can never get this . . . this is all Greek to me . . . I've never been good at this . . . I have no idea . . . I can't

I've been trying to get the printer going, but the printer has so many buttons I can't figure out which ones to push.

Some knowledge or experience. The customer uses some specialized terminology and shows an ability to follow the procedures, but doesn't volunteer more advanced explanations or descriptions.

I can . . . I've done this before . . . I know where the settings are

I've connected the printer cable and have gone through the setup procedure, but the printer just prints gibberish when I send a file to print.

Considerable knowledge or experience. The customer uses the correct jargon and volunteers suggestions that show a specialized knowledge of the product.

I've been doing this for ten years . . . I tried changing the settings in the software . . . I programmed a little routine to take care of the problem . . . I used my Web developer tools.

The setup routine went fine and I was able to print a test page using the printer's internal test function, but the printer isn't printing the Word file. I don't think this printer driver is compatible with the latest version of Word because I can print an ASCII file with no problem.

In the following e-mail, determine which words indicate the customer's knowledge and experience.

 

Dear Wordmasters,

I've been trying to change the default font so it always starts as 12-point Times New Roman. In the other systems I've used, the default is part of a style sheet or the options setting. I've done this a dozen times before. Just let me know where it is and I'll change it.

Aaron Sizemore
Senior Publications Designer
Throckmore Publications

 

Type the words indicating the reader's knowledge and experience in the box below:


 

Identify the customer's willingness
to cooperate.

Use the customer's words to identify his or her attitude or mental state. It may range from self-effacing and complimentary to hostile and uncooperative.

Examples:

Self-effacing, complimentary, cooperative:

You're probably tired of me . . . I apologize for being so dense . . . I know you're working hard . . . Thanks for all of your effort . . . You've gone beyond what I expected . . . Just help me get this and I can take it from there.

Expecting you to serve and be compliant

I want you to . . . do this . . . give me this . . . don't contact me until it's done . . . it's up to you . . . would you do this

Neutral:

Simple statements of fact.

Uncooperative:

I've done all I'm going to do . . . this is your job . . . you look it up, I don't want to hear explanations . . . don't ask me to send anything else

Hostile:

I don't expect you to get this right either . . . can I talk to someone competent . . . you're all a bunch of losers . . . this is the worst product I've ever had

In the following e-mail, determine which words indicate the customer's attitude or mental state.

 

Dear Lotsomail.com,

      What's going on? I signed up for your free e-mail service 2 months ago and have had nothing but bad luck! Yesterday, when I logged on, I found my old messages and address book entries completely deleted! What's next? I expect you to fix this before I get my mail tomorrow. Don't bother replying with "Thank you for contacting us" crap. Just fix this!!

                                    Damon Writer

 

Type the words indicating the reader's knowledge and experience in this box.



 

Exercise: Interpreting the customer's message

This is the e-mail from the customer. Answer the questions that follow it.

 

Dear Newcom Internet Services:

My latest statement showed that I owe $45 for additional time online from last month. I know I paid my bill in full last month so I'm asking you to check your records. In the future, I'm going to pay by check instead of credit card so I'll have proof that I've paid. Did you ever get that Internet connection into Brandtville fixed that I read about in the paper?

Norton Quest

 

What are the key words for the problem(s) and expectations? Group them and number the groups to show the problem(s) and expectations.


You should have three problems and your response should address all three. You also have two expectations, including the expectation that you will answer the customer's question. You should satisfy both expectations. If you missed even one of the five, it could be the one the customer notices or most wanted to hear about.

 

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